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Heeeeellllllloooooo everyone!! It's me, NewbornRay aka CrystiinaCreations!!~ I am here to talk to you about how my 2nd kids show, which is the first official pre-prequel to "Daily Life of Rayman" and "Rayman in: The Misadventures of Learning and Fun", called under the name "Storytime Adventures in PastryTown", starring Rayman Ancel. This comic idea was originally based off of a animated first person camera view dream scenario as to where I am watching Rayman interacting with the Narrator of the story, as Rayman was trying to get ready for bed as the narrator and the readers/viewers(like you) are helping him out on how important it is for him to get to bed and how to properly do it right as well. But he does eventually get to bed and the dream ends with Rayman falling asleep as the camera zooms out of Rayman's giant vanilla formed shaped house at night with the nice shining stars and moon. So now the real reason why I am here is to tell you how the plot scenarios were gonna go for the comic, and I have come up with a old and new plot scenario for them. Here is what I got down below:


Old Plot Scenario(#1): Rayman always starts his day with a smile and is greeted and woken up by the narrator of the comic, which tells the story of the day to the viewers, and talks to Rayman. In this comic series, Rayman doesn't talk much and will communicate with his emotions and body language, but will speak a few small words or sentences from time to time. Depending on what the story is gonna be about, it'll either take place in PastryTown or in the many other fantastic areas to explore outside the town like: "Blueberry Orchard, Lemon-Lime Falls, or Honey Comb Cave". During the adventures or activity of the day, Rayman and his pastry friends have to deal with one of the #1 town bully, Billy Blackberry, who always loves to steal or cause trouble to others. So it's up to Rayman, the narrator, and his friends, and you to stop him by saying: "Bad, Bad, Billy!! No, No, No!! Bad, Bad, Billy!! Stop, Stop, Stop!!" two times and it'll cause him to run away in defeat. After the day/activity is done, Rayman returns to his vanilla cake shaped house and gets into his PJs as he gets ready for bed. Then Rayman and the viewer/reader gets to hear a bedtime story to help him fall asleep, and then Rayman waves farewell to you as he gently falls asleep in his cozy bed as the narrator ends the story of the day as it shows the moonlight sky.


(Now here is the new plot idea, but a few from the first will remain the same.)


New Plot Scenario(#2): We start the story as the Narrator greets up to PastryTown, as he goes to Rayman's house to wake him up each morning from his nap, or sometimes Rayman would already be awake and is hiding in his room, playing Peekaboo with the narrator and also greets you(reader/viewer) with a big hug and nose rub and like I said from before in this comic series, Rayman doesn't talk much and will communicate with his emotions and body language, but will speak a few small words or sentences from time to time.. As usual, Rayman starts off his day as the narrator tells Rayman what to do to get ready each day as Ray has a schedule to follow that was set up by the king and queen since Rayman has been having a hard time keeping up with what he needs to do thanks to a side hobby he took for 4 years that got him to be a little bit more childlike. Rayman has 4 things to do for his schedule at home: "Play Time, Snack Time, Outside Time, and Bedtime." as the Narrator works it out through song and dance, or playing games with Rayman, and the veiwer/reader gets to help out or sing along. During the day, he might get a visit from his friends: Cherri and Berri, Bon-Bon, and Sweetie Cupcake, or the king and queen. During the story, there would be a moral or conflict they will have to solve as they hear that the #1 bully of PastryTown, Billy Blackberry, always loves to cause trouble for the townsfolk or Rayman and his little friends. So it's up to you to stop Billy by saying these lines to him: "Bad, Bad, Billy!! No, No, No!! Bad, Bad, Billy!! Stop, Stop, Stop!!", causing him to retreat in defeat, saying he'll be back again soon. Towards the end of the episode, once Rayman and friends learn about the moral or the answer to the problem of the day, they celebrate it by singing a completion song together as they dance as they sing about what they had learned today. Then finally, we end off the episode as Rayman heads back home after saying goodbye to his friends, as he makes it back home as it is now ready for "Bed Time" as Rayman gets very sleepy as the narrator and Ray say goodbye to the reader/veiwer as they end it off with Rayman closing the door, but not only after giving you a nice big kiss and waves goodbye as he closes the door to his home.


Now that I have both of them out, which scenario do you think is best for me to follow for this new kids show comic: Scenario 1 or Scenario 2? ~@NewbornRay aka CrystiinaCreations

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Heya!! It's me again!! I got come big changes coming to my kids show comic "Rayman in: the Misadventures of Learning and Fun!! Thanks to some help from my twin sister MonicaGenesis, she decided to give me the ideas of adding more classmates to Rayman's class so then he can new friends to play with and learn with together, and it'll be a total of 8 new students for Rayman to interact with along side his teacher, Mrs.Sunshine. My 2nd change is that I am gonna be giving Rayman some pants to wear for the upcoming episodes since I think it'll be better for him in my opinion(even though he has no legs), and my last update will be about how some episodes will focus on some of the other characters Rayman interacts with, and try to grow a friendly connection to all of his new friends. Anyways, that's all I have for now for this comic going onward!! Hope you like this change!

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Hey there, it's been a while since I had made a journal. I am here to talk about a bunch of memories that keeps coming up to me over and over again during rare moments during my college time at Wright State University. It's about how I used to "treat" artists and how I "try" to communicate with them. Back to when I first made this account,(Which this is my 5th account), I tried to communicate to the best of my ability. But there are some things I had done that I really regret doing all the way back.


One of my first most regrettable things I did was related to a character ship of two of Ubisoft's franchises of Rayman and Shay Cormac from Assassins Creed Rogue. There was a story made by an artist, who's name I will not say for safety reasons, that I grown way too overly obsessed with for a long time back in 2017, and like the "idiot" I was, I didn't know what plagiarism "was", and I stole their story and ship and tried to pull it off as my own as drawing gifts. But I knew what I was doing was wrong, but I just didn't stop since my obsessions' and my denial to listen kept taking over me. After doing all of that trouble and deleting all of the drawings I made for this artist, they ended up blocking me in the end and deleting all of their own pictures because of what I did to them. My 2nd one was exactly like this with another artist who did a ship of Rayman and Crash Bandicoot. This artist was okay with me for a while until just before I graduated high school and before I was 18 years old, I was mysteriously blocked by them just because they didn't like my "fetish art" and yet they never told me DIRECTLY themselves about this and I could've fixed it and move all of those to my stash. But NOOOOO, they just had to block me and not letting me fix anything at all!! That's the 3rd thing I had been dealing with before 2020!! Time and time again, I get told to "get lost" or "stay away from someone" who just doesn't like my fetish art, THINKING that I am showing this art to MINORS, even though half of my watchers were adults, and they NOW make it an issue since I am "18 YEARS OLD" and yet I was making these back to when I was 15 to 16 years old. I used to make "harmless" fetish art of Rayman being a Adult Baby for 4 years, and Rayman as a Tummy Lover for 10 years straight with no issues. But since I hated being blocked for literally doing nothing too harmful to any of my watchers, I had to delete all of the fetish art I had made for Rayman and make them for only myself a few trusted friends off of my DA account, just so then I can have my freedom to do this art for only myself now.


I used to have trusted a lot of artists who were my idols for a while, but most of them just seem to depart away from me and not want to have to do anything with me all because of the "bad" things I had ALREADY made up for, and that I try to show them that I can change. But NO, they just block me and not give me any chances to REDEEM myself, and they just want me to have this overwhelming guilt for the rest of my life and not even let me try to find a compromise to even make up for it at all!! It's just too much for me and I just can't take it anymore!! Just a few days ago, my trust has just been completely shattered.


The last straw that had finally came to me, mentally and physically, was the first artist that inspired me to come onto DA in the first place, and had given me so much inspiration and motivation for my own stories was a very great story artist, who was also a very dedicated Rayman fan artist, had just finally blocked me back on Tuesday of this week. They were someone who had given me so much love and appreciation, and I give it back to them in return. We even used to discuss lots of fun ideas and drawings through notes, and they were someone I had grown so much of an attachment to them over the years I had on DA. But just before 2019 ended, they sent me a bittersweet note about how I didn't reply to them and that they didn't think my time was worth it with them anymore, and they just leave DA and end up blocking me on my Instagram, and said on their previous journal on DA before they left is that anyone they blocked will be blocked forever, and that's what shattered me the hardest of all.


I want to let go of my attachment and love for "them", so my overwhelming guilt can stop coming back to haunt me, but I just can't do this all on my own.


I wanna get over all of my previous and HORRIBLE mistakes from the past so I can have a cleaner and better future for me, mentally and physically, and I want you all to help me through all of this. I had kept this sadness to myself for too long, and it's about time I should take a stand and do what is right for me and all of my dedicated watchers and closest friends on all of my social medias.


So please, give me all of the inspiration, motivation, love, and acceptance, so then I can finally move out of this old and crumbling shell of guilt and regret, so I can have a better and happier life here on DA for the new decade, and all of my other social medias. I would appreciate it so much.


Thank you so much. All of you.


~NewbornRay aka CrystiinaCreations

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My twin sister MonicaGenesis27 is looking for any artists who can be open or are open for any point commissions or art trades! If you seem interested, come to this journal here and participate! My sister would greatly appreciate it! Thank you! ^w^
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Howdy to all of my watchers! This is the full explanation to the plot for each episode of the new kids show comic "Rayman: Mrs.Sunshine's Educational Lessons of Fun".  This will show you all how the comic is gonna go each time so you all won't be left confused if I were to post it on my DA account or Instagram account.

1. Rayman is walking his way to Mrs.Sunshine's schoolhouse for speciality students that need help in many different ways. As he walks to the schoolhouse, he'll talk to the audience introducing himself,saying hello, and talks about what he's going to be learning about each day, depending on the item he shows or what he's wearing.

2. He gets to the schoolhouse,telling the audience to come in with him to see the inside of the school and leading his way to the classroom. He places his backpack in his cubby outside the classroom door. He starts to knock on the door 3 times and the teacher, Mary Sunshine A.K.A. Mrs.Sunshine appears at the door,surprising Rayman and the audience reading my comic as well. Mrs.Sunshine and Rayman greet each other as they share a hug, and she is excited to start the lessons for the day's subject of choice,and they head into the classroom.

3. They get into the classroom as Mrs. Sunshine starts to discuss the subject that'll be used in the lesson and how they'll do it. They start it out by doing fun games at the start that include either singing,dancing, or both at the same time.  Then after the games are done, the clock starts to chime 3 times with a cute jingle, which means it's time for Mrs.Sunshine's favorite time of the day. She calls it her "Magical  Time". She does this whenever she wants to make the lesson fun,and before she was a teacher, she started out as a part time magician when she was a young kid. She'll pull out her magician wand,and waves it around as she and Ray start to say the magic words: Sparkle,Sparkle! It's time for our Magical Time, two times. This'll make the whole classroom change into any place she wants depending on the subject that's being used, and can also change their clothes during it as well. Even sometimes, the objects in the classroom come to life as well. After Magical Time is over, the clock chimes 3 times again as the classroom changes back to normal,so as their clothes.

4. Mrs.Sunshine ends the class with one last thing before class is over for the day. She starts to congratulate how well Rayman has done during the class as they walk up to the lesson succession board, to where Rayman would get a golden star sticker next to his name, and also gets a lollipop as well for his positive attitude. Rayman thanks her for teaching him today, and that he'll be excited to see her next time for class. They both share a hug and a small song before they say farewell,and they depart ways.

5.Rayman heads out of the classroom,picking up his backpack as he exits the schoolhouse. He talks to the audience one last time as he talks about how he's glad you joined him in class today, and hopes to see you come to class with him to learn with him another day, and waves goodbye to the audience as he continues walking off screen, as it shows Mrs.Sunshine at the front door as she looks to the audience as well and gives a nice,small wink to all my readers.

Hope this'll help you all know how my new comic is gonna go and I hope you all will enjoy it as well as much as I do! ^w^
~NewbornRay
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